The recommendation outruns its justification
“We recommend a phased rollout beginning with the East regional warehouse.”
The draft states the phased approach as the plan, but never says why phasing beats a single cutover, or why East is the right place to start. A reader weighing risk will ask both.
Add one or two sentences that give the reason: what phasing buys (less disruption, a contained test) and why East specifically (lowest volume, most flexible staff). The gap is a missing “why,” not missing detail.